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SU Remake 9A

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A/N: Before I begin, I would like to not only thank Delete Lover and her Cyberchase fanfics (Alternate Machinos & Alternate Revolution), but also the Other-M series for the inspiration of what is about to come in this fanfic series. Plus, for the Alternate Robotnik, I will be using the Sonic Adventure style of him. Enjoy!

(OP: Reach for the Stars)

Sonic Underground Ep 9: Six is a Crowd

Story:

Aleena: (narrating) Sometimes, in the fight against tyranny, we find friends in the most unlikely places.

As she finished narrating, the SU was traveling through the icelands they had been before.

Manic: Yo, are we there yet, or are we lost?

Sonic, inside the snow with the others, glanced back as he spoke.

Sonic: (smirks) Relax, I know these mountains like the back of my hand!

They hit something as the group stopped.

Manic: (glances) Like the back of your hand, huh?

They got out of the snow as Mina spoke.

Mina: What happened?

Sonia: What did you hit?

They gasped as they saw what they hit: an upset Yeti.

Sonic: Oh boy...

Knuckles: Crap!

Sonia: Sonic Hedgehog, you are so in trouble!

The group looked frightened as both Sonic & Mina held onto them, then dashed away from the Yeti. The Yeti growled as the snow hit his eyes while the group quickly ran safely away from the monster. Just as they did, they didn't realize the cliff until it was too late.

Bunnie: (gasps) Oh my stars!

They then fell, but then the group was surrounded by the glow. At a familiar cave, the group emerged, each falling from the waterfall to the floor. It was the Oracle's cave. Julie-su, Cream, Bunnie, Sonia, Sonic, Manic, Remington, Knuckles, Ray, Mina, Cyrus, and Cheese got up as a familiar figure spoke.

Oracle: (glowing) Ah, you're just in time: for lunch!

A bit later, the group was eating the food as Sonic spoke with his mouth full.

Sonic: (muffles) Awesome dogs, Orc! (high-fives him to get a cool glow) Cool!

Remington: (sweatdrops) Sonic, it's not polite to talk with your mouthful!

That was when Sonia spoke.

Sonia: Oracle, we're here because-

He interrupted her, knowing what she was gonna say.

Oracle: You brought the globe, am I right?

The group looked confused.

All: Huh?

Cream: Wow...you are smart!

Cheese: Chao!

Manic: But, how'd you know?

Manic took the globe, the same one from before, out, showing it to him.

Sonia: You gave us the globe and told us to look deeply!

Mina: Yeah, but what does it mean?

The green hedgehog looked concerned as he spoke.

Manic: Did you mean that this is where we could find Mom?

Oracle: That is for you and your friends to discover.

Sonic: Geez, Orc! Do you ever just give a straight answer?

Ray: Yeah, why the hell don't you give us the straight answer?

Oracle: (smirks) What do you think?

The two with anger marks on their heads growled with anger as the Oracle spoke.

Oracle: To reach your quest, this globe is but the first step.

Bunnie: (confused) Of what...to regain the kingdom?

Cyrus: Probably...which is one of the reasons why I came with you guys...to learn more about this.

Sonic: (looks impatient) So, how 'bout we take the step already!

Oracle: Hmm...(laughs) Done!

Sonic: Cool!

Then, with a wave of his hand, the Oracle made a mist around the group, which was transporting them to another dimension.

Sonic: (snatches the food) I'll take these to go!

As he glowed while the group was being transported, he spoke to them seriously.

Oracle: Study those you encounter carefully, for through them, you may see your own future.

Then, the portal opened, making the group gasp. The group were then transported from the cave to someplace else entirely. There, everything in the cave was dark.

Manic: Whoa! Rippin' ride!

Sonic: So which way do we go?

Ray: And I think you better do it fast...

Sonia: Ssh! Listen!

They heard a tinkling noise as Sonia pointed to one of the entrances.

Sonia: Right there.

Bunnie: (smiles) Good goin', Sonia Gal!

Sonic: It's coming from this one all right!

The two fast members grabbed the others as Mina spoke.

Mina: Then, what are we waiting for? Let's rumble!

As they run into the cave, they were unknowingly warped to what looked like Mobotropolis, only a little more lifeless than Mobotropolis.

Manic: Dude, what happened?

Then, they gasped as they saw a hover car about to ram on them.

Mina: Look out!

They ducked as they glared at the driver angrily.

Sonic: Roadhog!

Then, Knuckles, Julie-su, Sonia, and Cyrus looked shocked at the city.

Sonia: Huh?

Knuckles: Oh my gosh! It's so beautiful! Just like in Angel Island.

Cyrus: And all of Mobius before the forces of evil came.

Manic: Yeah, I could seriously get into this place, right guys?

Julie-su: Strange...it looks a little lifeless for some reason.

Cream: I know...what do you think Sonic?

They then noticed Sonic looking at something.

Manic: Sonic? What's up?

Sonic: (points below) I finally got one!

Sonia: One what?

They looked a bit shocked as they saw what looked like a statue of Sonic down below.

Cyrus: I don't believe it!

The group headed down to look closer at it. When they were at the bottom, they saw the statue is of Sonic, but that one had a fat belly holding a chili-dog.

Sonic: Me neither, but what's with the bulge on my perfect bod?

Then, a lady squirrel approached, then saw Sonic. She gasped, bowed, and ran off quickly.

Sonia: What's with her?

Julie-su: And why do they have a statue of you?

The green hedgehog looked curiously at it as he spoke.

Manic: Maybe the pigeons needed a place to sit!

Sonic: Ah, I guess my coolness precedes me! Ever think of that?

All (but Sonic): No!

Sonic: (glares) Jealousy is not attractive!

They then noticed three other statues, two of them the same size as Sonic's, and the last one bigger than the three.

Sonia: Oh my gosh!

Manic: Ditto!

The first statue looked like Manic with an evil glare, the second statue looked like Sonia in a royal dress, and the last statue, which was huge, looked like a weasel in a strange suit holding a sword.

Cyrus: (looks at the huge statue's writing) "Dominos". Hmmm...very strange.

Bunnie: Oh my stars...

Sonic: There goes the neighborhood!

Manic: Hmph! Where's a pigeon when you need one?

Knuckles: Not funny, Manic.

Then, a horn sounded off as chili-dog van pulled up. That was when the blue hedgehog smirked.

Sonic: Break time!

He went up to the van, trying to follow. A little later, he finally caught up with it near the ruins, then made his order.

Sonic: Two doggies with the works, pal! Extra chili!

A familiar wolf in disguise turned around, then gasped.

Sleet: (bows) I am deeply honored, sire! Please, eat all you want, free of charge!

Sonic: (smirks) All I want? Free of charge? I think I've found paradise!

Then, a human in an orange mustache with a red and black outfit wearing goggles along with what looked like Cream and Knuckles was watching from a distance. He then gasped as he saw the others coming up to Sonic.

Man: I can't believe our luck!

Other Knuckles: All three hedgehogs without their bodyguards ripe for the picking, Eggman!

Other Cream: Time to tell Sleet it's a go!

Eggman (Man): (to the communicator) Snively, tell the wolf it's a go.

With the group, Mina looked horrified on the blood and ruins around the area they were in.

Mina: How awful! Nothing but ruins!

Manic: Yeah, looks like Robotropolis!

Remington: Except there's bones or blood surrounding the place.

Sonic: (eating) But the chili-dogs are free!

Then, the side doors in the van opened as some Mobians as of some smiling SWATBots came out. They gasped as they saw them.

Bunnie: What in the hoo-haw?

Then Antoine or what looked like him glared at them.

Antoine: You are now under our surveillance, "your majesties".

Sonic: A smiling SWATBot?!

Knuckles: And Mobians working together?

They then fired at the group. Sonic was then caught in the electric shackles by Sleet, who removed his disguise.

Bunnie: Hey!

Sonic: Hey you!

Sleet: (points to the inside) Inside! Move!

The blue hedgehog, who fell onto the floor, struggled to break the electric shackles as he glared.

Sonic: Damn, I don't think we're in Robotropolis any more...

The Mobians neared the group as Cyrus spoke.

Cyrus: Oracles; you gotta love 'em.

Sonic: (struggling) A little help here please?

Antoine: Did you not hear Monsieur Sleet?! Inside! Move now!

Manic: Ladies first!

The girls nodded as Mina speeded toward two of the Mobians firing at her, dodging the lasers and kicking them.

Mina: Ha! In your face!

The young rabbit flew up with her chao, both dodging and headbutting the Swatbots while Bunnie knocked the other Mobians down to the ground.

Sonia: Time to twirl and whirl!

She spun in a Super Twirl as the green hedgehog activated his medallion. Then, he quickly made an earthquake, shaking the ground while Cyrus was trying to free Sonic. Sleet's remote was grabbed by the red echidna as he glared.

Knuckles: Game over!

He then shot at each Mobian and Swatbot not destroyed, giving each of them the electric shackles.

Antoine: Eek! He is not going to like zis!

Sonic: Nice work guys, but, er...

He pointed to the shackles as Knuckles pressed the switch.

Knuckles: On it.

Then he shot at the shackles, making them disappear. That was when Manic saw something and pointed to the sky.

Manic: Incoming!

They gasped as they saw more Mobians and Swatbots heading toward them, shooting at them.

Sonic: Juice and jam time!

Sonic and Mina held onto them as they ran for their lives. While on the run, Cyrus saw an opening and pointed.

Cyrus: Sonic, Mina! Over there!

Sonic: Gotcha!

The group ran into the opening, leading to what appeared to be the sewers. They stopped once they were inside the dark area of the sewers.

Sonia: Did we lose them?

Sonic: I think so!

Cream: Yeah.

Then, the lights came on as the group of Mobians with another human and Eggman glared at the twelve.

Eggman: Think again!

They gasped at Eggman, who glared seriously at them.

(Flip Card: Dr Ivo "Eggman" Robotnik)
The gang visit the Oracle again and before they know it, he sends them to an alternate dimension, where they are the bad guys, and Robotnik aka Eggman is the good guy! They must defeat their corrupted selves and restore peace to Mobotropolis.
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OmegaMorph's avatar
Not bad, although I thought more alternate reality peeps would be added in. For this one I was thinking of re-arranging this ep entirely and turning it into a full-blown story arc featuring Scourge, but you seem to have different plans for devloping that particular char later on. ; )