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Minnie's Enchanted 9

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Chapter 9: (Pizza Trouble)

In a sewing office, Minnie's group looked amazed at the material they found while the birds rested themselves on the wreath-shaped heart with Adelaine kissing Mickey's cheek.

Adelaine: (smiles) I love them so much.

Mickey: Really?

Adelaine: Yeah, and usually, someone would send out those email cards or digital flowers. These are exquisite. And you don't find alot of doves in this place.

Mickey: Yeah, and it's a long story.

She giggled before taking the envelope, taking out two tickets.

Adelaine: And these? Oh, we're going to a ball?

Mickey: Uh, you don't have to.

Adelaine: Oh Mickey! It is so romantic! It's spontanious!

The mouse chuckled a bit.

Mickey: Oh, really.

Adelaine: Yeah, I can't wait.

Mickey: Oh, good. Great...(looks at Minnie) And about your concern about Minnie this morning, I'm just trying to say that nothing's-

Adelaine: (grins) You know what? If you say nothing happened, nothing happened. I trust you.

Mickey smiled a bit.

Mickey: That what you had in mind?

Adelaine: This is so unlike you.

She then gave the small mouse a hug, kissing him again.

Mickey: You know, it's strange. Despite us being together for a long time...when you kiss me, it's like kissing a mother I never even had.

Adelaine: Hmmm, how strange.

Back with Hiram's group, they passed though the bad part of town. There, they saw a hotel labeled "Sleazy Boys" while Vivian gulped.

Beldam: Now let me handle the money part. We need at least two rooms.

Jack: Why two rooms?

Vivian: Duh, we're girls! We need our privacy!

As they went in, Dooplis noticed the popcorn box Vivian brought pushing around.

Dooplis: Do you have to bring that?

Vivian: You're the one who went cruel to them!

Dooplis: I had to take my anger out on something!

Later, in the hotel room, Goofy removed his shoes, with the help of Jack and Dooplis. The dog nudged a bit as the TV suddenly came on.

Goofy: Gawrsh, that magic box turned on like magic.

Then, three familiar sirens, one of them groaning, came in.

Vivian: It's called a TV, Goofy.

Beldam: (frowns) We were only suppose to pay 10 bucks to stay for each room. Well, thanks to you, Vivian, our stay now cost to stay the night has gone up 3 times as much as the original price!

Vivian: (frightened) Oh, I'm sorry, Beldam! I'm not good at haggling!

Donald then noticed the remote, picking it up.

Donald: Hmmm...

It then changed to a channel where they saw a reporter named Scarlet Garcia talking with Larxene.

Scarlet: In the middle of Tune Square, where the bus driver who was ambushed today...

The news continued as the group yelped.

Group: Gah!

Hiram: Change it now! Hurry!

Donald: (pressing the buttons) I'm doing it! I'm doing it!

Goofy: It appears this odd box controls the magic mirror.

Vivian: TV.

Donald: Whatever!

Larxene's Voice: ...and then these chipmunks-

The channel switched to a soap opera where a squirrel named Conker and a chipmunk named Berri were talking.

Conker: ...a moment's day or two.

Berri: (walks away) Don't you have any like self-respect?

Jack looked a bit interested as did Vivian.

Vivian: Oh, I love this soap opera.

Beldam: (to Hiram) Vivian has alot of time when concerning programs from the human world.

The male turned his love around before he spoke.

Conker: Who needs self-respect? Which is your lips against mine.

Jack looked surprised before the TV switched to a scene with pink elephants (aka Dumbo), much to Vivian's fright.

Vivian: AHHH! Pink elephants!

She hid under the covers.

Vivian: Pink elephants scare me! Especially from Dumbo!

Jack Spicer: Hey, change it back. Go back one.

He changed it back to the soap opera as Vivian came out.

Vivian: Phew.

Berri: I'm like not gonna love a man who doesn't even like himself.

She turned away from him, much to Conker's concern. Jack really looked stunned.

Berri: Get away from me, Conker, you like disgust me.

Conker: I can't help my feelings for you...

Just then, three familiar chipmunks came out of the popcorn box. The three then noticed the dog, mouse, and duck before they landed near them.

Donald: Where the heck were you three?!

They pointed to the foes and Vivian watching TV, hushing them.

Donald: (quietly) Okay.

Theodore mimicked Dooplis, trying to get the message to him.

Goofy: The Sirens like the way he leaps?

Simon grunted as he immitated Minnie before looking like he was dying.

Goofy: Hiram's handsome, even when he sleeps, right?

They groaned as the chipmunks yelled. As that happened, Dooplis noticed the chipmunks before yelping, grabbing all three of them.

Dooplis: (mocking) Awww, such sad little chipmunks. Oh, they're deranged from exhaustion. Must have a nice little neither.

With that, Dooplis went to the hanger closet. Inside, he placed clips on each hanger onto the chipmunks' hands. They groaned as a "Do Not Disturb" sign was placed on them by the chuckling Dooplis.

Dooplis: Night, night, rodents. Sleep tight, suckers. He-he.

He then closed the closet door. As soon as he was out, he prepared to head out.

Dooplis: I think I need some air, guys. Later.

Jack Spicer: Only if I go with you.

The two headed out as the fat mouse looked concerned.

Vivian: (watching) No! She's deceiving you! Don't do it, Conker!

Beldam: Yeesh, you and your soap operas, Vivian. Besides, they're just acting.

Vivian: I know, but it looks so real.

Beldam: Like you and your ex-boyfriend, Scorpio?

Vivian: Gah! Don't remind me of him!

Just then, Jack came back in, looking at Hiram.

Jack Spicer: Uh, sire?

Hiram: Yeah?

Jack Spicer: This is kinda a personal question, but...do you...like yourself?

Hiram: What's not to like?

The goth boy nodded a bit before Dooplis yanked him out of the room.

Dooplis: Come on!

In the closet, the chipmunks struggled before the sign fell of them. Simon, noticing themselves swinging, grinned a bit, motioning his brothers. The other two nodded and swung each side before they landed on the ground. Quickly, they made their way to the window, unknown to the others.

Vivian: (notices) Donald, I was watching that!

Donald: You don't need more drama than we're already having now!

Vivian: I'm not spreading drama!

The trio came to the window, noticing Jack with Dooplis running through the streets. They frowned, opening the window with the hangar hooks. They came out of the room, grunting before they noticed the powerline. They nodded, quickly sliding down the powerline and flipping before they were freed from the hangars. They landed on the top of the street lamp, noticing Jack and Dooplis heading uptown before they quickly followed.

Jack Spicer: (to Dooplis) Hey, you think that maybe Azula is-

Dooplis: We're not having that discussion with your girlfriend again!

Jack Spicer: She's not my girlfriend!

That night, the moon shone while Italian music was heard. In a Pizza Planet, the pizza was served as Minnie looked at Mickey.

Mickey: Oh, here. Look.

He then took the top of the salt shaker.

Mickey: Watch very carefully.

He then covered his hands over the shaker, then as if by instant, it was gone.

Mickey: It's just as easy as that.

He then neared Minnie's ear, making the top appear, much to Minnie's excitement.

Minnie: Oh, do it again! (claps) Show me! It's wonderful! Show me again!

Mickey: All right. (does the trick again) Do this, and this, and look.

When the trick was done, Minnie gasped in surprise. She then thought of something.

Minnie: You're a wizard!

Mickey: (chuckles) Well, I do know a few spells, but I haven't used them since my days with being raised by my mentor, Yen Sid.

Minnie: Oh my goodness.

She laughed as Mickey placed the salt shaker top back. Another thought came to Minnie's mind.

Mickey: What?

Minnie: (looks around) This is a very nice place.

Mickey: Yeah.

Minnie: And we're eating dinner.

Mickey: Of course.

Minnie: This is a date!

Mickey: Yeah-(realizes) No! No, no, no, no. We're just-we're just friends. Besides, people don't usually bring their children or their friends and family on dates.

They looked at another table with the Lumas, nephews, niece, Cream, Pluto, Daisy, Sora, Riku, Kairi, and Felicia helping to fold napkins.

Minnie: Oh, that's too bad. Your nephews and niece are lovely and Cream's a lovely girl, even if you're babysitting her. They're very kind and very sweet.

Mickey: (nods) Yep, they're great...same with my dog, Pluto. Ha-ha.

He then noticed the look on Minnie's eyes.

Mickey: What?

Minnie: Oh, do they miss them terribly?

Mickey: Miss who?

Minnie: Their mothers and fathers?

Mickey: Oh, them? Oh, don't worry, I'm sure their parents will pick them up after their vacations.

Minnie: Oh...you know, you look like you used to have someone before Adelaine.

Mickey: Yeah, well um...(concerned) well, we just...

Minnie: What?

As he spoke next, the four humans listened carefully as did Daisy.

Mickey: (sighs) We actually don't talk about my first girlfriend.

Minnie: Oh, I'm very sorry. I didn't mean to pry.

Mickey: No, no, it's okay. It's just that um...I don't talk about it...to the kids or to anybody.

Minnie: (worried) 'Cause it was very sad.

Mickey: Not at first, though it's strange I can't quite remember her face. I know I was in love with someone when I was younger...

Minnie: (grins) You were in love.

Mickey: Yeah...that was the problem.

Minnie: (surprised) How can that be a problem?

Mickey: Because love...the lovey-dovey version you talk about? That's fantasy. And then one day, you have to wake up and...you're in the real world.

Minnie: What made you wake up?

Mickey: Well...(sighs) when I was about 10, right about the time she turned eight, she left.

Minnie: (sadly) I'm so sorry for you both.

Mickey: It's okay. It's one thing I couldn't have handled, though I'm still trying to remember who she was.

Mickey then looked at the four kids, who looked at him.

Mickey: It's them, however. They're mostly shy. And they don't get many friends. I just want them to be strong, you know. To be able to face the worst things. That's why I don't encourage the fairy tales. I don't want to set them to believe in a "Dreams Come True" nonsense.

Minnie: But dreams do come true! And maybe something wonderful will happen.

Mickey: (looks at the kids) Yeah, well, I forgot who I was talking to.

Minnie: Yeah, well I hope you don't forget. I like talking to you.

Minnie sighed Daisy pondered a bit.

Sora: What is it, Daisy?

Daisy: I seem to recall Minnie mentioning her first love, though she couldn't remember who he was. She also informed me he was gone by the time she was eight, and that was on the night before the supposed wedding.

Kairi: (surprised) You don't think...

Pluto sniffed a bit before he growled in anger.

Felicia: Pluto? What is it?

Just then, a familiar Duplighost in disguise along with a familiar goth boy came.

Dooplis: (bad Italian accent) For the nice-a lady.

Mickey glanced at the two, placing down some apple juice.

Jack Spicer: From the secret-a admire.

Minnie smiled.

Mickey: Secret admire? How do you keep getting free stuff?

Minnie: What is it?

Dooplis: It's a glass-a of special apple-a juice.

Minnie: Oh. (looks at it) Ooooh, it looks yummy.

Mickey: Well, be careful with that. It's poisonous.

The Duplighost glanced at him.

Minnie: (smiles) You're joking.

They laughed as did both Jack and Dooplis reluctantly.

Mickey: But seriously, just be careful. I mean, sometimes apple juice has sugar and if you drink too much, it can make you hyper.

Minnie: Well, I'll just take one sip.

She took the cup as the two grinned.

Jack Spicer: One sip is all it-a takes.

Sora: Strange, that guy with the goggles looks like Jack.

Before Minnie could take a sip, three familiar chipmunks jumped and hit the glass, knocking it off of Minnie.

Jack Spicer: (glares) You! Why you little!

The chipmunks grinned as Mickey gasped.

Mickey: There are chipmunks on the table! Kids, we need some help here!

The humans, kids, Pluto, and Daisy gasped at the three chipmunks, heading to them. Jack was shrieking and Dooplis yelped.

Minnie: It's all right. It's all right! Here, Alvin, Simon, and Theodore.

The chipmunks smiled with the two foes quickly leaving. The three chipmunks hugged Minnie's cheek. Just then, the other people noticed as they yelped.

Muriel: They're chewing off her face!

Kids: (smiles) Chipmunks!

Sora: Alvin, Simon, and Theodore!?

Riku: What are they doing here?

Mickey: Kids, they're loaded with disease.

Kairi: Hey, we were animals once too, you know.

The chipmunks mimicked three familiar someones that made Sora, Riku, Kairi, Daisy, and Minnie grin.

Minnie: Hiram is here!

Daisy: That means Donald and Goofy are here, too!

Mickey: Donald and Goofy? Now those names are definitely familiar, can't remember where.

Just then, a familiar goth boy yelled, trying to hit the three chipmunks. They ran up to Minnie's head as she yelped.

Minnie: Oh! Get off!

Jack Spicer: Okie-dokie!

Mickey: Duck!

Daisy: Where?

She was pulled down. He then nearly whacked them, though missed as they jumped off and he hit the empty bowls.

Minnie: (looks around) Alvin?

Felicia: Simon? Theodore?

Jack and Dooplis looked around, searching for the three chipmunks.

Mickey: They probably just headed off.

Minnie: Oh heavens me, no.

Daisy: Where are those chipmunks?

Melody: (notices) The pizza is breathing!

The group looked as the Duplighost noticed.

Minnie: (smiles) Oh, chipmunks. He-he-he.

Dooplis: (grabs the pizza) Gotcha!

Minnie's group gasped before Dooplis noticed the opened oven, tossing the pizza with the trapped trio into it. Just as it neared the oven, the three chipmunks jumped out just as flames arose, devouring the pizza with flames. The trio then landed in a glass bottle. All while Minnie's group looked extremely worried.

Minnie: Oh no.

The audience clapped while Minnie started to cry.

Mickey: Hey, it's okay. It's okay.

Morty: Oh, Uncle Mickey.

The nephews, nieces, and Pluto looked worried while Mickey sighed, hugging the other mice. Dooplis and Jack only sheepishly grinned while the three groaning chipmunks groaned inside their glass prison. Back in the hotel, Vivian finished watching her soap operas before flipping the channels.

Goofy: Tell us, magic mirror, what is this awful and strange place? Heck why is it so difficult for the king to find her? Is he ever going to find his heart's duet?

Vivian: You're talking to a device that makes no response to you other than showing pictures.

Beldam: What do you think?

Donald: Besides, we need to do something other than watch something mindless on TV.

Vivian: Hey! Some shows aren't mindless!

Goofy only flipped the channel, changing to the news with Scarlet talking with an officer.

Officer: ...in the pizza oven did not reveal any rodent remains. The animals are still out there somewhere.

Scarlett: Also joining us today is the mouse that was attacked by these insane chipmunks?

The group yelped as they noticed some familiar figures.

Hiram: Minnie!

Donald: And there's Daisy and the Lumas!

Goofy: Those humans look like Sora, Riku, Kairi, and Felicia.

Vivian: I think they are them!

Goofy: Minnie and Daisy as the animals?

Donald frowned, groaning.

Donald: Aw forget it!

Scarlett: (to Minnie) How does it feel that knowing these dangerous animals are most likely still alive?

Minnie: (smiles) Wonderful! Oh, Alvin and the Chipmunks are our very own best friends! And well-

Sora: They're not dangerous! We were originally animals before turning to humans by Star Bits and-

Then, to Hiram's shock and horrified expression, he saw Mickey with the kids coming to them.

Mickey: Uh, Minnie, guys, we have to go.

Scarlett: Just one question. Just one more question.

The fat mouse, in a jealousy rage, sat up as he frowned, taking out his sword.

Hiram: What villainy is this!?

Scarlett: Is this unprovoked attack part of some new trend? Is rodent rage on the rise?

Vivian: Oh my goodness.

Donald went near the TV as he spoke.

Donald: If that's happening to Minnie, who knows what's going to happen to Daisy!

Vivian: Oh, tell us, TV, the king's begging you, tell us where she is!

Scarlett: ...coming to you in 20th and Ogenville.

Goofy: Got it, 20th and Ogenville! I think we can remember that. A-hyuck (hugs the TV) thanks, Mirror.

He kissed the TV, much to the others' annoyance while Beldam and Marlyn yelped.

Beldam: Now guys, stop! We won't let-

Vivian: Sorry, we gotta go now. Goodnight, sis. Take care of the two rooms we had.

With that, they were off, leaving the two sirens.

Beldam: Oh that's just great, what else can go wrong?

Voice: Hey!

The two looked at the person named Janitor, holding a bill to the two.

Janitor: I believe these are yours...you still have to pay for them.

The two fell as Beldam groaned.

Beldam: I had to ask!

(End of Chapter 9)
The first parody of Enchanted starring Mickey Mouse, Minnie Mouse, and many others.
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jacobyel's avatar
Sora saying "Alvin, Simon and Theodore?" Wow, I don't believe it!