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Minnie's Enchanted 6

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Chapter 6: (Buses & Azula's Plot)

Back with Azula, she frowned from the vision that was shown earlier.

Azula: Oh, she'd just love to come crawl back here and steal my crown, cast aside much like such royal, snubbish-

Just then, she spit out some leaves that fell on her. She glanced at Dooplis and Jack fixing the bushes to make it in her image.

Dooplis: Maybe he won't find her.

Azula: (angrily) Perhaps he will!

Jack yelped, making himself accidentally cut off the head. The mouse frowned, tossing the head into the hole. Just then, she had an idea, much to the Sirens' notice.

Beldam: Your evilness?

Azula: Hmmm...

She then faked her misery.

Azula: Oh, I do wish there was someone who cared enough for me...to go after him.

Jack and Dooplis both looked down from the ladder.

Dooplis: (grins) Oh, goodness.

Jack: My, my.

They came down as they went to her.

Azula: He's gotta be strong and brave. I'd do anything for him.

She took the leaf off the monkey, making him laugh a bit.

Azula: Like you two.

Jack: (smirks) Don't you worry,

The two headed to the hole.

Both: We will stop him!

They jumped downward before the mouse glanced at the Shadow Sirens.

Beldam: You know we're the only ones that can teleport without the use of a Luma and that can remain the same like over here.

Azula: Will you just go?!

Shadow Sirens: Yes, ma'am!

With that, they teleported out of the castle and out of the kingdom. Back in the human world, Duke and the others were about to close the hole.

Duke: Close it up.

Just as they closed it up, they heard two screams. They yelped when they heard it colliding to the sewer.

Workers: Whoa!

They looked down as they saw the top off and a tail-less butt stuck along with a cloaked butt. Both of them were grunting.

Duke: What now, another one?

As he spoke next, three familiar figures reappeared on the streets.

Duke: Get them out of there!

Then, two familiar figures were helped up, though the first one had Jack's clothes, hair and eyes, he was more of a pale human. THe other was a creature in a white sheet with yellow eyes. He wore some brown shoes, a blue party hat with spots, and a bowtie. This was Dooplis in his new form. (AKA Dooplis as he really is.)

Jack: Ow...

Just then, the two noticed each other before they screamed.

Both: AHHH! What did she do to you!? (looks at themselves) What did those Lumas do to us?!

Another Luma came out as it laughed a bit.

Duke: Hey, pals.

Dooplis: (posing) Hi-yah!

Beldam only slapped her forehead.

Beldam: Oh great, first he's a dumb ghost, now he's a freak in the sheet! What's this dumb place coming to?

Duke: (to Jack) Let me guess: you're looking for a beautiful girl, too.

Jack: Well, actually-

Dooplis: No! I'm looking for a rat in king's clothing.

Duke: Riiiight.

Just then, a familiar voice was heard from the two. They and the Shadow Siren turned, noticing three familiar figures on the bus.

Hiram: You've met your match, you foul bellowing beast!

Donald: We'll handle this!

Goofy: Uh, guys. Don't you think-

Neither of them listened as Donald snatched the mouse's sword, stabbing the bus. Inside, the crowd gasped as a woman named Madam Foster noticed the flour stabbed. The bus driver named Larxene stopped the bus.

Larxene: What the heck?

The blade was removed as the old woman moved away.

Larxene: Now calm down, guys. Stay in the bus.

The mouse looked at the opened door.

Hiram: Minnie?

The chipmunks, dog, and duck looked through the window.

Goofy: Minnie, you here? Daisy?

Donald: Where is she and Daisy?

Hiram: (to Larxene) The steel beast is dead, peasants, and thanks to Donald, you're all set free.

Larxene got out of the bus, then glared at the trio.

Larxene: Are you idiots crazy!? Nobody stabs my bus! I'll tear you apart! Do you hear me? You jerks get down here right now!

Donald: But it was his sword.

Hiram: (glares) You're the one who stabbed it!

Donald: Only after because we thought it was a monster!

Just then, the Shadow Sirens, Dooplis, and Jack came to the angry woman.

Dooplis: Uh, excuse me. Allow us.

Hiram: (notices) Jack? Dooplis? Why do you two look like that?

Donald: Did you guys come to help, too?

Jack: Hey, guys, you mind if I suggest...uh...

The chipmunks looked at the situation as Larxene glared.

Larxene: Are you five a friend of his?

Beldam: Uh...we don't know him.

Marlyn: Guh!

Vivian: But Beldam, I thought you knew-

Beldam: (slaps her mouth shut) Quiet, Vivian. Do you want us to get sliced and diced by a Nobody like her?

Larxene: Just when it can't get worse, we got a rat trying to stab my bus!

Hiram: (glares) I'm not a rat!

Larxene: (anger mark) JUST GET DOWN NOW!

He yelped a bit.

Goofy: Gawrsh, she's uptight.

Larxene turned back to Dooplis and Jack while the chipmunks got on her head.

Larxene: As for you two, are you trying to mess up my route? I'll tear you all apart!

Alvin mimicked her a bit, much to Dooplis' notice.

Larxene: Don't you roll your eyes at me, you...

Just then, she noticed the chipmunks on her head before she screamed.

Larxene: AHHH! RATS! GET 'EM AWAY FROM ME!!

The chipmunks scattered as Larxene tried getting them off.

Donald: Oh brother.

Goofy: Well, strictly speaking, they're chipmunks like Chip 'n Dale.

Larxene kept screaming while the five looked at the three above.

Beldam: Sire, may I suggest we seek elsewhere for your bride?

In a huge building of Pete, Vermin, and Rat LLP", many people walked around while Mickey with Minnie, Daisy, Felicia, Sora, Riku, Kairi, the two Lumas that tagged along, and Pluto entered. The newcomers looked at the huge statue of a woman before Mickey and Pluto noticed.

Mickey: What are you guys looking at?

Minnie: She's beautiful.

Mickey: (takes her hand) Come on, Minnie. That's a statue.

Riku: I wonder if it's a gargoyle in there?

They left the area. In the office area, the group came to a familiar mouse girl.

Mickey: Quickly, quickly.

He came to her as she finished talking to Timmy.

Mickey: Jenny, Jenny, please don't tell me June and Betty are here-

Jenny: June and Betty are already here.

Mickey: Oh no.

Mickey then looked at a window, noticing more couples with the two couples, Cat R. Waul, and Mortimer.

Jenny: Along with Danny, Jake, their lawyer, and you'll also be surprised that there are more signing with you and Mortimer.

Mickey: (sighs) Oh no, don't tell me Mortimer had something to do with it.

Jenny: No, he didn't.

Mickey: Phew, thank goodness.

Jenny: It was your boss, Pete.

Mickey: Oh great, this is not good.

Sora: What's wrong with that?

Mickey: He's not only the boss of this place, but also the owner of the apartment building I live in.

Riku: Okay, that's officially messed up.

Felicia: Yeah!

Mickey: Anyway, how long have they been here?

Jenny: You really wanna know?

Mickey: Not really. Okay, anyway, I need you to do something for me.

Jenny: Okay.

He then pointed to Minnie and the others.

Mickey: You see these people over here?

Jenny: Uh, who are they?

As he spoke next, Minnie, picking up a cup, looked at the fishes in the tank.

Mickey: I have no idea. I'm pretty sure they're from out of town.

Jenny: What do you want me to do?

Minnie prepared to put the cup into the tank.

Mickey: Well, find out where she's from and get her along with her friends there. And make sure it's cheap, because I'm gonna have to pay for it. (realizes) Oh, and uh, if Adelaine calls me, I need to talk to her.

He walked toward Minnie, who was about to drink the cup of fish water, much to the others' notice.

Daisy: Minnie! Stop!

Sora: Wait, Minnie!

Mickey: Don't drink it, okay?

He took Minnie's arm.

Mickey: I have a quick and important meeting. Jenny is gonna get you guys home.

Daisy: About time.

The group came to the mouse trying to call a transportation place as Mickey spoke.

Mickey: Minnie, Daisy, Sora, Riku, Kairi, Felicia, Lumas, this is Jenny. Jenny, Minnie and her friends.

Jenny: (to the group) Hi.

Mickey: Here, and stay out of trouble.

He dashed off while Pluto looked at the group.

Jenny: (notices) Pluto, I thought we made it clear that we can't let Pete or any cat lawyers see you in the building or you'll cause us trouble.

Pluto only barked a bit, licking Sora's face.

Sora: He-he. Well, he kinda likes us during our time with him and Mickey.

Jenny then noticed Minnie spitting out a fish into Jenny's cup of water.

Daisy: Ewww, I wouldn't drink that if I were you.

Jenny: Noted.

Minnie: (grins) It's nice to meet you.

Jenny: (uncomfy) Uh, nice to meet you, too.

Unknown to any of them, a familiar figure's face appeared in the tank, glaring at Minnie's group. She noticed a fish near her before she nearly bit him, scaring him, and vanished. In the kitchen, a white haired man with yellow eyes in chef clothing (aka Dooplis using a disguise) looked around.

Dooplis: Your Majesty? Azula?

Azula's Voice: Dooplis!

Dooplis: (hearing it) Azula!

He looked at the covers before hearing Azula in the pot.

Azula's Voice: (in the pot) Dooplis, in here!

He motioned a familiar goth boy in a chef disguise (who finished peeling the bananas for the desserts) before they came near the pot.

Azula's Voice: (angrily) IDIOTS!!

Jack: Gah!

He took the handle, though he burned himself a bit.

Jack: AHHHH!

Dooplis: Idiot.

He took the pot holder, opening the lid as Azula's image gasped.

Azula: Finally! Finally, I've been boiling in there. Have you two found her yet?

Jack: I'm afraid we haven't my lady.

Azula: (sighs) Time is of the essence, and we can't risk my steps in bringing the girl back.

Jack: It's done, Your Majesty, I swear it.

Dooplis: Why do you still have a crush on her, even though you're human now?

Jack: What?! I do not!

Azula: (ignoring) Oh, he shant, I have to make absolutely certain of that.

Jack: But Your Majesty, how do you exactly-

Dooplis: Shhh! Jack!

The two looked, noticing a chef named Skinner noticing them, talking to the pot.

Jack: (sweatdrops) Uh, ever ended up tasting so-

He pretended to lick the pot, making a yummy noise.

Dooplis & Azula: Idiot.

Just then, the two noticed three apples popping up from the pot.

Jack: Oh great, the poison apples cliche. I guess you want us to-

Dooplis: Off the girl off?

Azula: But boys, don't you see, my darling? If there's ever going to be a happily ever after for us...

Jack realized what she meant before Dooplis slapped his forehead.

Jack: I want...an ever after...my lady.

Dooplis: Ick!

Azula: (chuckles) Yes, it won't be difficult. Just one bite, that's all it takes.

Dooplis only took out the apples as she spoke.

Azula: One small bite...

She took the apple.

Azula: To drag her down into a deep and troubled sleep!

She let go of the apple as it popped back up before Dooplis took it.

Azula: And then when the hands of the clock strike 12, that precious little pretender to my throne will be dead!

Jack: Don't worry, it'll be done in no time. I swear it.

Azula: (chuckles) Yes, you'll find the girl and her brats at Pete, Vermin, and-

Before she could finish, a chef named Chef took the portion with Azula with a dipping spoon, putting it on the bowl.

Dooplis: Oh nuts!

Jack: Azula?

They noticed she was gone as they frowned.

Dooplis: (notices) Oh rats!

Jack looked up as well, noticing the chipmunks waving sheepishly, much to their anger.

Dooplis: Why you little-!

The two tried grabbing them, but Alvin, Simon, and Theodore were quicker.

Skinner: Hey!

The chipmunks came out, noticing Hiram, Donald, and Goofy (who was counting his change) heading to a table.

Goofy: Good thing this place takes Munny here. A-hyuck.

As the three sat down, preparing to eat, the chipmunks landed near them as they looked confused.

Donald: Wak! What is it?

Hiram: Alvin? Simon? Theodore?

Just then, Jack and Dooplis (back in normal form) came to them.

Dooplis: Guys, guys, please, I beg of you!

Jack: Don't listen to those insane little vermins! They probably ate some bad nuts or something.

All while the Shadow Sirens came to the table with their food.

Vivian: What's going on?

Jack: I say you should put those three down for their own good.

Jack was about to use the knife on Simon before Hiram stopped him.

Hiram: Oh please, let those three speak.

Dooplis: But, sire, they, especially Alvin, are delirious and they can tell all sorts of-

Donald: Come on! You know they can't speak due to them eating those Star Bits I showed them while in this world.

The chipmunks coughed when the butter knife was removed before they were placed down.

Hiram: Go ahead, you three. What is that you want to say?

The trio motioned the mouse, duck, and dog to look at them.

Goofy: Hey, I know this game. I love charades. I'll see what they have to say.

Beldam: (slaps her forehead) I know this is gonna end up being very painful.

Simon pointed to Jack and Dooplis.

Hiram: Okay, Jack and Dooplis.

They motioned to make it look like they were bad.

Goofy: I think they're saying Jack and Dooplis are glad to have you near, Your Majesty. Luckily I'm good at charades.

Simon groaned, slapping his forehead. The trio chirped "no" to the ones watching. Simon then had an idea, whispering to his brothers in a language they only understood. They nodded with Alvin pretending to be Dooplis. Simon climbed to the cup of soda, making "bloop" sounds to the top of the cup.

Goofy: Gawrsh.

He took the piece of ice before giving it to Alvin, still in his imitation, shining the ice and made a motion. Theodore pretended to be Minnie while chirping her song from the beginning.

Goofy: Oh! I think I heard it somewhere before.

The two chipmunks made motions of Dooplis about to offer Minnie an "apple", though refusing at first. Theodore took it, then ate it. After a second, he made it look like he was dying. When it was done, the chipmunks posed. Jack looked worried while Beldam slapped her forehead.

Goofy: Hey, I got it! You guys would die without the Mouse King, Donald, and me here.

The others knowing what's really going on only face faulted toward Goofy.

Beldam: (to the others) Good thing he's actually lousy on that game.

(End of Chapter 6)
The first parody of Enchanted starring Mickey Mouse, Minnie Mouse, and many others.
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Morty340's avatar
Great chapter! Uh-oh! Azula's goons are in the real world!

Please continue!