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Minnie's Enchanted 2

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Chapter 2: (In a Human World)

The next day, wedding bells were heard while white petals fell to the ground. At the bottom of the stairs, both Jack & Vivian were talking as they headed down.

Vivian: I still can't believe you criticize people's singing, especially the king's and mine.

Jack Spicer: It's not the singing. You two are good at the singing part. It's the song I can't stand. It's stupid.

Vivian: (narrows) What do you mean?

Jack Spicer: I mean Hiram looked dumb singing that stupid song. And I'm sure people like Jake Long, Naruto, Don Karnage, Danny Fenton, Delete, and who knows who else would look extremely stupid while singing it.

Vivian: (hits him) Jack, you have no heart! I happen to like that song. I bet you wouldn't say something like that if you had a girlfriend.

Jack Spicer: (rolls eyes) Like that will ever happen.

Beldam: (appearing) What are you two babbling about?

Vivian: (notices) Here they come!

The three noticed the coach arriving.

Beldam: Well, better now than never.

Vivian: For the wedding, right?

Jack went to the coach and opened it, though it hit his nose. Then, out stepped Minnie, now dressed in a white wedding dress with matching slippers.

Minnie: (notices) Oh, excuse me. I am so sorry.

She chuckled a bit, getting out.

Minnie: Oh, am I late.

Jack Spicer: (rubs his nose) No.

Minnie: Oh, I hope I'm not late.

Beldam: (bows) Just in time.

Minnie: (smiles) Oh, he-he, thank goodness. Ha-ha.

She then headed off as a familiar chipmunk were left behind, much to the three's surprise.

Alvin: Hey, Minnie. Wait up. We ain't done with you yet.

He chased after her with Jack sighing. The other animals then came out, forcing both Jack and Beldam to duck and Vivian following the animals.

Beldam: Hey!

Some of the animals helped Sarah with the veil, cutting it to the right size before Kairi & Felicia put the veil on her waist. The birds then put a white crown on her head.

Minnie: Oh. (smiles) Thank you.

Birds: You're welcome, Minnie.

Vivian: (giggles) You look nice in them.

Then, the two saw Daisy, now dressed in a sleeveless purple dress and a tiara.

Daisy: M'lady, it's time.

Minnie and Vivian nodded, with the two along with Kairi & Felicia in their arms, following Daisy inside. As they followed, Beldam headed up behind Minnie, catching up while Minnie's group entered. Jack, now caught up, then smirked before he spoke.

Jack Spicer: See ya, losers!

He then closed the doors, leaving the chipmunks, Sora, Riku, and the others out, with Alvin hitting the door before Theodore helped him.

Alvin: (frowns) Ow, and what do we look like? Garbage? Close the door on me, will you?

Simon: I guess he must not like outsiders.

Theodore: Strange, the rat-looking mouse didn't mind Sora, Riku, Kairi, and Felicia when they rode off to the castle yesterday.

Sora: (frowns) Something's wrong...let's go, Riku.

Riku: (nods) Right, Sora, but to where?

Sora then grinned as the group saw a tree, leading to the top of the wall.

Sora: I think I just found our entrance.

Inside, Beldam, Jack, adn Vivian were trying to catch up to the four ahead.

Minnie: And to think, in just a few moments that Hiram and I-that he and me-

Jack Spicer: Yes, yes. Okay.

Daisy: I still don't like it.

Minnie: It's destiny, Daisy.

Daisy: I'm glad "destiny" doesn't affect me. If it did, I'd be with Mr. "Wak-wak-wak-wak"!

They laughed a bit before a figure, an old rat with ghost-like yellow eyes, popped up, frightening the group (minus Beldam, who only smirked).

All (but Beldam): Ahhh!

Jack then looked down at himself.

Jack Spicer: Uh, I wet myself.

Beldam: (slaps her forehead) You idiot.

Minnie: Oh my.

Rat: (sounding old-like) Oh, what a lovely bride.

Minnie: (sighs) Oh, that's very kind of you, but I-

But the rat quickly stopped her.

Rat: Oh, no, no. Gramps has a wedding gift for you, child.

Minnie: (trying to move her) Thank you, but we really should be going, you see.

Vivian: (curious) Those eyes are familiar...but from where?

Before the four could go on further, the rat yanked her by grabbing her arm.

Felicia: Hey!

Rat: (dragging her) But this is a wishing well, dear.

Minnie: (walks with her) Oh, but all my wishes are about to come true.

Kairi: (looks at the rat) Those eyes look very familiar.

Jack, now hiding with Marlyn, sighed in relief.

Jack Spicer: Good idea Azula was using your ghost friend, huh?

Marlyn: Guh!

Back with Sora's group, they got to the top of the palace wall as Alvin frowned.

Alvin: Well, if I ever see that dumb mama's boy's face again, I'll-

Minnie's Voice: Excuse me, but I really do have to go.

He stopped, then turned as he looked behind, noticing the rat with Minnie, Daisy, Kairi, and Felicia heading to a well with a waterfall.

Rat: (pushing her) Oh, but a wish on your wedding day. That's the most magical of all.

Minnie, Daisy, and the two in their arms looked amazed at the area as she smiled.

Rat: Just close your eyes, my darling...

Minnie was then near the edge of the well as the rat continued.

Rat: And make your wish. That's right. That's right. Lean in close...

She leaned a bit close before the rat smirked.

Rat: Are you wishing for something?

Minnie then nodded with a grin.

Minnie: Yes, I am.

Just as Vivian came, Minnie then closed her eyes, smiling a bit. Vivian finally noticed the eyes, gasping.

Minnie: When we both live happily ever aft-

Vivian: Minnie, watch out!

Minnie: Huh?

Just then, the rat shoved the four, making them gasp and scream before they fell through the well.

Alvin: (worried) Oh! Help! Help! (realizes) Hiram!

Simon: Donald!

Theodore: Goofy!

Riku: Guys!

Sora: Help! Anyone!

Five: Need help!

Quickly, Sora's group, watching the horrible event, went to the big tree, heading off.

Sora: We gotta get help!

As they were gone, Azula came out of hiding, laughing.

Azula: Good work, Dooplis.

The rat smirked, transforming back to a familiar Boo.

Dooplis: (smirks) Awww, you're too kind.

Vivian: Oh no...poor Minnie...

Then, Beldam, finally caught up with Marlyn and Jack following.

Beldam: My most adored queen, where did you had Dooplis send them?

Azula: To a place where there are no happily ever afters.

Vivian: (worried) Oh no...the others are gonna be sad when they hear this...(to herself) especially their boyfriends.

Dooplis: Soooo...who wants to eat cake?

Beldam: (slaps him) Not now!

Back with Minnie, she and the others continued falling down and screaming. The four then gasped as they saw some water at the end, then fell in it. The four floated around in the water.

Minnie: What is this place?

Daisy: I think I heard of what happens here. It's where the Lumas live. Sometimes, they send out some star bits. And once you get hit by many star bits, you get changed as soon you get transported somewhere by a Luma.

Felicia: Well, hurry before those things get here.

Just then, a star bit hit both the cat and lioness.

Kairi: (to herself) Wha...what is this?

Daisy: Uh oh...(using a wand) Barrier!

Quickly, both Minnie and Daisy were in the barrier.

Felicia: (notices) Star bits?

The group then saw many laughing Lumas.

Minnie: And those are the Lumas, right?

Then, more of the star bits began hitting the lioness, cat, and the barrier the mouse and duck were in, making them worry. The four kept on screaming until everything was covered in bits. The last one then hit them as a white flash was seen before a white Luma transformed to a comet, absorbed the four, and was seen going around.

Four: AHHHH!!

Then, in an instant, everything became dark. Later, in a blackened area, Minnie and Daisy started to awaken.

Minnie: My goodness, what happened?

Daisy: (notices something) Huh? That Luma came with us. (realizes) Of course. The Luma sticks with you for a while until you decide to go back the way you came.

Minnie: (looks around) But where are Felicia and Kairi?

Kairi's Voice: We're right here.

Felicia's Voice: Yeah. Don't shout.

The two looked at the shadowy area where their voices were.

Minnie: (grins) I'm glad you two are all right.

The figures of both Felicia and Kairi looked at themselves, looking confused.

Kairi: What happened to us?

Felicia: We look...different.

The two continued examining themselves before they looked at Minnie, looking reluctant to touch the area with the light. Minnie took a peek through the light before she began opening what appeared to be a lid. Minnie and Daisy finally pushed the lid off before the got out of the sewer together, looking surprised at the animals and the strange creatures (aka humans) going through the city.

Daisy: Wha...what is this place?

Minnie and Daisy noticed some of them staring at the two. Daisy completely got out of the sewer while Minnie tried getting out, although it was difficult with the dress.

Daisy: Here, let me help you.

Minnie: Thanks, Daisy.

The two yelped as Minnie was finally out. Minnie then landed on the ground as two figures with the same Luma came out, much to Daisy's notice.

Daisy: (shocked) Oh my gosh! Kairi, Felicia, what happened to you?

There, the two saw two human girls. The first one was a blue eyed blue haired girl wearing a cat costume (although parts of it were somewhat a little revealing). The other had red hair and blue eyes wearing a pink dress with some white and red shoes. They were Felicia and Kairi's human forms.

Kairi: What's happening?

Just then, the four screamed as they saw a truck coming their way. They ran from the truck before they screamed, noticing a car coming to them before it stopped. Another car collided to it before the four kept running, making traffic stop at some points. Finally, they reached the sidewalk, though Daisy tripped on some glass merchandise, breaking it.

Daisy: Oof!

They got up with the moose named Lumpus frowning.

Lumpus: Hey, lady! Are you crazy? Now you gotta pay for all of this!

Minnie only continued screaming as she was stuck with the crowd, trying to get through until she noticed something coming under her dress. The scout named Edward frowned at her.

Edward: Hey, watch it, will you?

Minnie: (grins) Donald!

Edward: (looks at her) Geez, lady! Are you for real?

He walked away as Minnie looked concerned.

Minnie: I think so. (notices) Wait! Where are you going?

Edward, looking back, only groaned before disappearing into the crowd.

Minnie: (being shoved) If you could...just point me to the castle. (notices) Oh, excuse me. (being shoved) And if you take me...to my true love.

Unfortunately, Minnie kept being shoved eventually to the subway station.

Minnie: Oh! Hiram! Hiram! Oh! Hiram!

Just as she disappeared into the subway, Daisy, Felicia, the Luma, and Kairi looked around.

Daisy: Minnie? Minnie!

The four yelped as they too were being shoved into the subway station. A bit later, Minnie, now reunited with the others, came out of the other station.

Daisy: Geez, don't go off running like that again. You had us worried.

Kairi: (notices) What place is this now?

They looked at the empty and ruined area of the city.

Minnie: Hiram? (worried) Oh, dear.

The four walked through the area, looking a bit worried. A bit later, the four continued until they saw an old man named Eustace grumbling.

Minnie: Oh! Hello, old man! Oh, hello! (goes near him) May I sit with you?

Eustace: (frowns) Whatever, stupid mouse.

She sighed and sat down.

Felicia: Uh, Minnie?

Minnie: I'm very tired, and I'm scared. We've never been this far away from home before and we're not sure where we are.

Daisy: (concerned) Minnie?

Minnie: (to Eustace) If somebody could show just a bit of kindness, a friendly "hello", or even smile, I'm sure it would lift my spirits so much.

Eustace only smirked.

Eustace: I'll give you kindness...

Minnie: Oh, uh, you have a lovely smile.

Kairi: I don't think we should trust him.

Minnie: Why?

Eustace snatched the crown, then ran off, laughing.

Daisy: That's why.

Minnie: Oh! (stands up) Where are you going? That's mine!

Eustace kept laughing as Minnie kept chasing after him.

Minnie: Oh! Bring that back here! Come back here! I need that!

Eustace: Ha! Shouldn't have let me take an advantage of you then!

Minnie: Oh, please!

The group finally stopped as thunder roared.

Minnie: (frowns) You are not a very nice old man!

The Luma looked a little worried as well.

Daisy: What else can go wrong?

Another thunder roar was heard just as it started pouring out rain on the five.

Felicia: (sweatdrops) You had to ask.

(End of Chapter 2)
My first version of my Enchanted parody starring Mickey Mouse, Minnie Mouse, and many others.
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