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Minnie's Enchanted 10

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Chapter 10: (Reunion and Confusion)

Back in Mickey's apartment, Minnie looked at the children in their beds as she spoke to them. As she spoke, a smiling Mickey and the others watched.

Minnie: Goodness, we sure had a lot of excitement tonight. Were you scared?

Morty: A little bit, but do you think those chipmunks will be ok?

Minnie: Oh, well, I wouldn't worry about them. They're very brave. I remember this one time, when the whole Goody Bandit thing happened and an actor, the poor wolf, and the grandmother were trying to find Red Puckett...if it weren't for the chipmunks giving them the right direction, I don't know what would've happened.

Melody: (confused) I don't really remember that version.

Minnie: Well, that's because Red, her grandmother, the wolf, and his sidekick Twitchy tell it a little differently from their points of views.

Daisy: Yeah, even though the woodsman can be a bonehead sometimes.

Cream: Goodnight, Minnie, and thank you for the nice story.

Minnie: Goodnight, children.

They hugged while Cream kissed her cheek. That night, outside the apartment area, Hiram, Donald, Goofy, and Vivian panted as they groaned.

Donald: Where the heck is that place anyway?

The fat mouse realized, looking back at the apartment area.

Hiram: That's it!

The four quickly headed to the building, passing an old lady with her dog. Then, they stopped, hiding behind the pedestal. Suddenly, they noticed the dog before looking down at what it was doing.

Goofy: Gawrsh, he thinks my foot's a bathroom.

Vivian: Gross!

They yelped, noticing the guard heading to the woman and dog. Quickly, they made their attempt, heading to the building. Vivian went first, spinning through the spinning door before coming out of the building.

Donald: Hey, I thought you said you knew places like this!

Vivian: Don't blame me. I only learned a little from the TVs.

Goofy: Sometimes, TV may not be good enough for you.

Hiram: Let's just go already!

They went through the door, this time completely heading inside. Inside, they ran up the stairs to the second floor. The group looked around while the fat mouse went to one of the doors, knocking on it.

Hiram: Minnie?

The door opened up, revealing a pregnant woman with children named Bonnie, much to the mouse's confusion.

Bonnie: You're too late.

Hiram: (stricken) My apologies.

He quickly ran off. At another door, Donald knocked before it opened, revealing a man named Trunks with a cat hissing at Donald. He frowned, hissing back a little. With Goofy, he yelped, hearing the dog behind. With Vivian, she saw the door open up, revealing a frowning snow leopard named Tai Lung.

Vivian: (sweatdrops) You know what...forget it.

She left while the four groaned in exhaustion, sliding down to the floor.

Hiram: (sighs) Oh, Minnie.

Back with Minnie, she and her friends looked through the book Mickey gave the children the other day. The male mouse, in a robe, with Pluto came to them as he looked concerned.

Mickey: Look, Minnie.

They looked at him.

Mickey: That was a nice story. You know, nothing to dream about, though.

Minnie: (smiles) Yes.

Mickey: You know, I know what it's like when somebody wants you.

She looked at Mickey.

Mickey: It's tempting to say things in which they weren't or how they are.

Minnie: I wished that he's coming, Mickey. He is .

Mickey: Right. Because the chipmunks told you.

Minnie: Yes. Simon, Theodore, and Alvin said that-

Mickey: You know what? I don't know if you're kidding or if you're being ironic, because chipmunks, they don't talk.

Minnie: Well, not here, they don't.

Sora: Probably because of the Lumas.

The three Lumas nodded.

Mickey: Well, I'm not saying not to take advice from a forest rodent, I'm just saying that, um...you know, if it didn't work out and things don't stay the way they were. Then what?

Minnie: That's very kind of you, Mickey, but Hiram is coming for me.

Riku: Why do I sense an argument about to break out?

Felicia: Uh, we'll leave you guys alone.

Kairi: Yeah. Let's go, everyone.

The others left as Mickey continued toward Minnie.

Mickey: What if he doesn't?

Minnie: (frowns) Why do you keep saying that?

Mickey: Because I deal with this every day. If a relationship has issues from the beginning, it doesn't get any better.

Minnie: He is coming.

Mickey: Minnie, I don't think so. No.

Minnie: (glares) Yes!

Mickey: (frowns) Well, I have to disagree. No.

Minnie: No?

Mickey: No.

Minnie: (narrows) Is that the only word you know? "No?"

Mickey: No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no. I mean, No!

Minnie: "No! No! No!" Over and over! When you keep saying "No!" it just makes me so...Sometimes you make me so...

Mickey: Minnie.

Minnie: You make me so...so...angry!

The female mouse finally grinned, laughing like a squealing girl.

Minnie: I'm angry. Ha-ha-ha!

Mickey: Are you all right?

Minnie: I'm angry. (looks at Mickey) I'm angry!

She slapped Mickey.

Mickey: Ow. Are you okay?

Minnie: I'm...(calmly) I-I'm wonderful.

She sighed and giggled a bit.

Mickey: Are you sure?

Minnie: Yes, I'm...I'm fine.

She touched him a bit before continuing.

Minnie: I'm just a little...

Mickey and Minnie looked at one another, nearing their faces close. However, at the final moment, Mickey turned away.

Mickey: Okay.

He headed to the door, looking back at Minnie.

Mickey: Well, goodnight.

Minnie looked at Mickey heading into the room before it closed. The female mouse sat on the chair, looking concern at what had almost happen.

Minnie: Oh my.

Inside the bedroom, Mickey sat on the bed, sighing. Mickey closed his robe up a bit.

Mickey: It's weird, Pluto.

The dog in question was also in the room as he looked at his master.

Mickey: It's like from my dreams...you think she may be...?

The next morning, Mickey and Pluto, both yawning, came out of the bedroom before looking into the children's room. There, on the floor, he saw some cloth with a dress-shaped and bow-shaped holes on them, making him grin a little.

Mickey: Oh, Minnie. Ha-ha.

Out of the kitchen came Minnie, now wearing white with flowers on her dress and bow, with a picture of coffee.

Mickey: Good morning.

Children: Good morning, Uncle Mickey.

Minnie: Good morning.

Mickey pat the children's heads.

Mickey: Hi. (notices) You made breakfast. Great.

A knock was heard.

Cream: I'll get it.

Mickey: Thanks.

She went to the door while Mickey looked at Minnie's clothing.

Mickey: Nice dress.

Minnie: Why thank you.

Voice: It is I, Hiram, the soon-to-be Mouse King of Animaland off to rescue my lovely bride.

Minnie's group, hearing the voice, gasped as they heard the voice.

Minnie: Hiram!

Daisy: That means Donald's with him, too!

Minnie: He's here!

Mickey: Apparently.

Minnie: Oh my. Oh my goodness.

She got up, heading to the area where Hiram's group with Cream were.

Minnie: Oh, um.

She stopped, looking back at Mickey.

Minnie: How do I look?

Mickey: Slightly stunned.

Minnie: No, I mean, how do I look?

Mickey: (realizes) Oh, that. Ha-ha. Sorry...you look...beautiful.

The female mouse smiled a bit. At that moment, as soon as the four came to the living room, they turned, noticing some familiar figures, two which made Hiram and Donald gasp.

Donald: Daisy!

Hiram: Minnie!

Minnie: (smiles) Hiram!

Daisy: Oh, hi, Donald.

The female mouse ran up to his arms before the bigger mouse lifted her, chuckling. Mickey sighed, looking confused.

Goofy: (notices) Hmmm, does that mouse seem familiar, Donald?

Donald: I'm thinking!

Mickey finally walked over to the bigger mouse twirling with Minnie.

Mickey: I'm sorry, but um-please, could you just be careful?

As soon as he placed Minnie down, he noticed Mickey, glaring at him.

Hiram: You!

He brought out his sword, pointing it toward Mickey.

Hiram: (narrows) You're the one who's been holding my Minnie captive.

Mickey: J-Just stay calm!

He prepared to run with the fat mouse preparing to swing.

Minnie: No!

He pointed the sword toward Mickey's neck.

Hiram: Hmmm...you seem familiar...can't quite recall where, though. Anyway, any last words before I dispatch you?

Mickey: You've gotta be kidding me.

Goofy: That's strange words.

He prepared to slash him.

Minnie: No!

Quickly, Sora came between him and Mickey, blocking the attack with his keyblade.

Sora: Hey, cut it out!

Hiram: What are you doing!? That's the enemy!

Sora: Will you stop acting like a rat you are? (yelps) Uh oh.

Hiram: (anger mark) Just for that, you're dead, too!

The others quickly stopped him.

Daisy: Will you cut that out?

Minnie: No, no...these are my friends.

Goofy: Oops, sorry about that.

Hiram: (sighs) Fine.

He placed his sword away while the children with Pluto came to Mickey.

Minnie: This is Mickey. Mickey, Cream, Morty, Freddy, Melody, Pluto, these are Vivian, Donald, Goofy, and Hiram.

Goofy: I sense he's gonna sing now.

Daisy: Do we need a reminder?

Hiram: (singing) I've been dreaming of a true love's kiss

Mickey: This seems kind of silly.

Riku: You get use to it.

Hiram: (singing) And a miss I have begun to miss

They looked as Hiram took Minnie's hands, then danced a bit.

Hiram: (singing) Pure and sweet waiting to complete

Vivian: Why don't I hear music, guys?

Hiram: (singing) My love song

Daisy: (to Cream) Somehow, I picture Mickey singing with Minnie instead.

The kids tried not to chuckle loudly as he continued.

Hiram: (singing) Yes, there's a maid somewhere I've never met

He came to Minnie as he almost finished the song.

Hiram: (singing) Who was made...

They noticed Minnie smiling, though they noticed Minnie wasn't paying attention.

Goofy: Uh, Minnie?

Hiram: (singing)...who was made...

Daisy also looked a bit concerned.

Daisy: Minnie, I think your like was (singing) ...to finish your duet...

Vivian: Oh no!

The others looked worried as Minnie noticed

Minnie: What's wrong?

Goofy: You're not singing with him.

Minnie: (realizing) Oh. Oh, no I'm not. Well, I was just thinking.

Vivian: (perplexed) Think-ing...?

Daisy: Yes, like I do sometimes, Donald?

Donald: Ah phooey. Women aren't suppose to think. That's why we live in a world where women are only second class citizens!

She shoved Donald onto the floor in anger.

Minnie: Before we leave, there's one thing I would love to do.

Hiram: (kneels) Name it, my love and it is done.

Minnie: I wanna go on a date.

Hiram: A date...

Goofy: (confused) A date? What's a date?

Minnie: Well...

She then looked at Mickey, who nodded to her.

Minnie: We go out to dinner and we talk about ourselves. Our likes and dislikes. Our interests...a date. Ha-ha.

Hiram: Well...I do wanna get some things out of my chest.

A bit later, outside, Hiram looked at his sword, making sure his blade was still pointy while Minnie and Daisy were talking to Mickey and the children.

Minnie: And remember that you guys come and visit Animaland anytime.

Mickey: Sure thing, Minnie. And if you guys come to town sometime, we should all get together for dinner.

Minnie smiled a bit.

Minnie: That would be lovely.

Sora: Listen...about that...Riku, Kairi, Felicia and I decided to stay.

Daisy: What!?

Kairi: We like our human forms.

Donald: Oh great, you guys in human forms are adapting to human ways!

Daisy: Come on, Donald. At least let them stay.

Vivian: She does speak the truth.

Donald: (sighs) Okay...

They paused for a moment before Mickey spoke.

Mickey: We'll see each other soon. It's not like we're talking about, you know, forever.

Minnie: And ever.

Goofy: (to Vivian) I think she really does like him.

Vivian: I know.

Mickey: So, uh...

He looked at the fat mouse, who smirked.

Mickey: Good luck on your date.

Minnie: Oh, and...and you with Adelaine.

He nodded while the mouse, ducks, dog, and siren looked at the crying children and the sad looking dog.

Minnie: And you five...it was so nice spending time with you.

The children hugged Minnie and Daisy.

Daisy: Bye, we'll never forget you. You know that.

They stopped as Cream spoke.

Cream: There is a saying that says "Never say Never", but there are times when it's an exception.

She felt Hiram's paw touch her shoulder. She looked at the fat mouse before he looked at Mickey.

Hiram: (to Mickey) Thank you for taking care of my bride, peasants.

Goofy: Bye, Mickey.

Minnie smiled a bit before she with Hiram, Donald, Daisy, Goofy, and Vivian headed off.

Goofy: You think I can find a date on my own?

All while tears filled the childrens' eyes.

Melody: We're gonna really miss her.

Mickey: (sadly) Me too, sweetheart. Me too.

Felicia: Yeah...it really is goodbye.

They hugged the children. As the security guard came to the water filler man, a familiar evil mouse glared at the scene with Minnie's group heading out. A bit later, the same glaring mosue glared at both Dooplis and Jack Spicer, who were drinking some soda while Beldam and Marlyn, exhausted, came to the stool, groaning.

Jack Spicer: Now I can explain-

Dooplis: It's his fault. He made the lousy shots and-

Jack Spicer: I'm not certain how they found each other, Azula, I really don't-

Azula: You idiots!

Dooplis: But queenie-

Azula: I sent you two to kill her, not save her! Can't you two get that straight?

Beldam: (groans) I knew sending a freak in the sheet and a mama's boy was a bad idea! Never send them to do a Shadow Siren's job!

Jack Spicer: I-I realize you're upset, madam, but if you would find your way to give us one last chance, we'll-

Azula: Silence! You think poison apples grow on trees? There's only one left. You're both out of chances!

Dooplis: Now come on, Azula, I-

Beldam: Will you two shut up and let her talk!?

She slapped the two.

Azula: Thank you, Beldam.

Beldam: Why don't you send me to do the job? I can do it easier than these two.

Azula: No, no, Beldam. (sighs) Forget it, I don't want my best to have all the suffering.

Marlyn: Guh.

Azula: I am coming there and I will kill the wretched rat MYSEEEEEEELF!!

The glasses cracked, destroying all the bottles and glasses when they broke. Then, three familiar chipmunks landed near them as they groaned. The three yelped, noticing them as Theodore dropped a piece of nut.

(End of Chapter 10)
The first Enchanted parody starring Mickey Mouse, Minnie Mouse, and many others.
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Uh-oh! Azula's up to no good!